One teacher said that our shots were very well and gentle.
This worked well with the genre of the film. Also worms eye view shots of the
boots looked really good. It would be even better if the titles were further
apart and not as close to the edge of the screen. Also if we included dietetic
sound in the changing room of football boots and people talking in the
background. Also we had a wobbly at the end which we sorted out and was still.
The other teacher said the start was very good and it set
the scene. They wasn't sure on the font of our titles so we searched for better
ones that fitted the genre more. The transition from old to new wasn't clear so
we needed to fit the change in better so it was clearer for the viewers as to
which one he was. Also the story line wasn't clear for the rest of the film.
Making the transition better made it clearer.
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